Here [UPDATE:  Broken]

1.  Presenting conditions [still negative unfortunately]

2.  What we do

3.  What we might benefit

UPDATE:  Somewhere else I found a good heuristic on writing copy.

• Why is the reader here?
• Who is the author?
• What is the service?
• What is this a good idea now?
• Why is the price reasonable?

It’s time for positive psychology to lay out its wares clearly?